Sales email.

Subject: I quit my job to write you this email

This morning I stormed into my boss’s office and said:

“I have to write an email to [Marta].”

Not getting this off my chest keeps me tossing and turning at night,

To the point that I’m quitting my job to get this info out.

Here’s the thing: there’s always one weirdo in every inbox, [Marta], and today, that’s me.

I’ve been going through PitchCraft AI’s blog for a while now, and I noticed your article “How AI Roleplay Is Changing Sales Training” is missing something that could help it rank higher and pull in more traffic than it’s currently getting: a solid backlink pointing to it.

I work with RUHCopy, and I spotted an easy win, a link between us that’d genuinely help both sides.

Here’s a quick 2-minute Loom breaking down exactly what I found and why it works.

[www.loom.com/share/sample-link-123]

WARNING: If you’re skeptical about clicking links…

I get it. So here’s a picture of cute me:

(Pretty sure no bot would dare fake this much cuteness)

Cheers,
Mohammed Ibath
RUHCopy

Tip: This email uses curiosity before the ask. Most outreach opens with “I want a link,” which reads as a transaction before the reader even knows who’s writing. This one opens with a weird, personal hook, “I quit my job to write you this email,” so the reader is curious, not defensive, by the time the actual request shows up. It’s specific, not generic. Naming the exact article and exact gap (“missing a backlink”) proves it wasn’t mass-sent to 500 sites.

The Loom video and the “cute me” line both do the same job: lowering suspicion before asking the reader to click anything or trust a stranger. Small ask, low pressure. There’s no hard pitch here, just an offer that costs them nothing but two minutes of attention.

Sales email.

Subject Line: You will fail definitely 

Why do you keep trusting thieves?

Imagine loaning $10,000 to a friend for free with no interest.

Now, imagine they lend your money to someone else at 25% interest, keeping all the profit.

And to top it off, they charge you a fee for the privilege of holding onto your own money.

Absurd, right?

But that’s exactly what your bank does every single day.

Bank of America, Chase, Wells Fargo they’ve mastered the art of robbing you blind while making you thank them for it.

Your savings don’t grow. Their profits do.

Your fees stay high. Their vaults overflow.

So let me ask you:

Why do you keep playing this game?

If you’re earning good money yet:

• Scrambling to make it between paychecks,
• Dipping into savings just to stay afloat, or
• Feeling trapped by credit card debt…

Then you’ve fallen into the trap they designed.

But here’s the truth no one tells you:

It’s not just about the banks. It’s about you.

You’re stuck because of your money mindset.

And until you fix that, nothing changes.

Inside my coaching program, we attack this problem head-on.

1️⃣ We rewire your mindset to break free from the lies you’ve been sold.

2️⃣ We equip you with real strategies to build wealth and take back control of your financial future.

The world isn’t waiting for you to catch up.

The banks aren’t going to change.

You have two choices:

Keep being the victim of their game.

Or learn how to play it better than them.

Which one are you choosing?

Your move.
🤑 [Click here to take back control]

Tip: This email uses PAS: Problem, Agitate, Solution. It opens with a problem the reader already feels but hasn’t named. Then it agitates, turning “banks are unfair” into “you’re the reason nothing’s changed.” That shift is the whole engine. It stops blaming an outside villain and makes the reader responsible, which is uncomfortable enough to force a decision. Short lines.

No paragraphs longer than two sentences. White space does the pacing for you. The CTA doesn’t ask, it forces a choice: stay a victim or take control. That binary framing is intentional. People move faster away from pain than toward a reward.